Ash Williams atempt

[het]

here is my Ash Williams card.
thanks for advices.

[Sylis]

First thing is I would just read over it another time, there are quite a few spelling errors. Second, the abilities are worded strange... I think I understand what they are suppose to do, but I'm not sure... What do you mean at first wound, exchange shotgun by chainsaw? Do you mean when he takes hit first wound, he can discard the chainsaw for a shotgun? Another thing, "Closest girl" could be the only female character on the other side of the board, so that ability seems one, unrealistic... well in as realistic as a zombie fighting board game can get... I would say change it to an adjacent space or even 2 spaces away. As for picking up the shotgun, thats ok, but now you are giving him a better chance of not losing it? Honestly, he seems very over powered to be a serious character. Is this a joke character or one you are going to give a shot?

[het]

hello
thanks and sorry for my english.

I wanted to make some fun but playable card.
And rather closed to the movie character...

I didn't want to make a strong character, especially at the beginning of the game...
This is the reason why :
- he has : 2 wounds template card
- he doesn't begin the game in the store (where he can find his preferred weapon)(ok the cabin doesn't exist yet, just have to make a new map or place this character on the road).

Then
-at the first time he receives a wound, he must exchange the shotgun with chainsaw (so if he has the shotgun, he must dismiss the card and change it by chainsow. if he doesn't have yet the gun, he 's just wounded as any other character.
- As heroe, his testosterone pushes him to help girls near him, so he receives a wound in place of any girl in adjacent place.

so he has to take care of his position : closed to girls with ability to heal, but perhaps not too closed to threatened girls...

thanks for advice and correct wording

[Sylis]

No problem.

Ok, those make better sense. Now what I would say, is change to finding the shotgun period, maybe have it that he can take it from the discard pile. Because there are only two Pump Shotguns in the deck, and if they are from the discard pile, your ability wouldn't work, with the way it is worded. Also I would still take away the "Only losses it on a roll of 1" Because that still makes it a strong ability, being able to pick it up from the Discard pile.

So Bottom line, this is the abilities he has or I would suggest.

Boomstick - When in the General Store, he may take the Pump Shotgun from the Discard Pile instead of searching.

No guts, no Glory - On his first wound, must exchange the Shotgun for the Chainsaw.

Anti-Hero Strength - May Prevent the wound of a female hero in an adjacent space by taking a would himself on a roll of +3.

I think that is a little easier to understand and sounds like a fun character to use.

[het]

sounds great
thx

[fallensaviour]

Cool!!!
Every body needs an Ash in their game.
Here is mine;
Figure came from studio miniatures painted by me.





The Handicap "missing hand" means he is unable to use two handed weapons I have been wanting to edit it but just haven't yet.
I went with the actual movie still to keep the card in the same flavour as the LNOE cards that have actual actors on the cards.

[Worldmaggot]

fallensaviour - Nice Truck! Great Heroes, especially the Shotgun shells...and, wait, naked Zombies?

[het]

here it is...what's your opinion ?

[Sylis]

fallensaviour Wrote:Cool!!!
Every body needs an Ash in their game.
Here is mine;
Figure came from studio miniatures painted by me.





The Handicap "missing hand" means he is unable to use two handed weapons I have been wanting to edit it but just haven't yet.
I went with the actual movie still to keep the card in the same flavour as the LNOE cards that have actual actors on the cards.

So I got to ask... What is the handicap with the "Missing Right hand" Maybe he can only carry 3 cards instead of 4? LIke 2 weapons and 1 item, or if there are any two handed weapons, he can't use them?