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Here's another 5 pager that I just typed up for another contest. This time I have plenty of time to tweek it so please critique.
I thought it was pretty slick. Would play out nicely on film I think.

I wouldn't mind seeing a subtle tie between the husband and the delivery man, be it in the cut scene on the phone, or at the end, but I can also see why you'd leave that vague/up for interpretation.
It's nicely paced & it does leave you with a lot of questions
& wanting more.

What is the contest about (it's criteria)?

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