Some Walking Dead characters

[blakeb]

(01-09-2013 09:17 PM)samuraitrev Wrote:  Hi Blakeb,

You've done some good work here and they must have took you a long time. I've just bought the 17th graphic novel and I'm a huge Walking Dead fan. I've had a good look at your work and I've found some issues and given some suggestions. I hope they help.

Thanks so much for your feedback! I'll take it all under consideration. As for your suggestions, here's what I was thinking when I made them.

Quote:Merle
For the ability Sword Handed delete Hero's choice it is superfluous. You've already said it's the Heroes choice with the word; may. Typo on his No Fear ability. It should read marked and not maked.

I worded it that way because that's how its written on Sally's Lucky ability. For a lot of these I tried to keep the same powers as already exisiting characters.

Quote:Rick
Duffle Bag is OP in my opinion change it to 5+.

Thanks. I haven't play-tested this yet so I may change. I know its a powerful ability, which is always why I gave him the Group Leader ability as a slight negative ability.

Quote:Daryl
I would change the wording to his ability. The weapon name Crossbow has no relevance to the ability. If you want to give him a Crossbow as a ranged weapon then go for it... I would have the Zombie discard a random card otherwise the ability is too OP. He needs to have 3 Wounds.

I imagine like he is shooting the crossbow into a group of zombie and hitting something. So like his arrow is hitting the zombie hand, or something. I think maybe a random card would be better. I feel like giving someone a permanent ranged weapon would be too good, although I do like the idea of it.

Quote:Michone
On the Survivalist ability, please, please, please absolutely ditch the reshuffle that would be an almighty pain. Just put the other card in the discard pile. Her Katana is the same as Sam's Brawling let's be a bit more imaginative. How about you roll 1 die, like with the Sledgehammer.

Combat Bonus
The Hero may only roll a single Fight Die (additional Fight Dice may NOT be added). If a 5 or 6 is rolled, the Zombie is instantly Killed. The Combat Bonus must be used before Fight Dice are rolled.

Hmm, that is a good idea for the Katana. I did copy the Brawling ability because like I said before, I copied other abilities on purpose. Just so I could use the cards instead and the game would be essentially the same. To make it seem more appealing to some of my friends. I gave her a second ability because, Sam has Brawling and 4 lives. I was going to give her 4 lives, so she need another ability. There is no sword for her to start the game with, so I figured make it something random.

Again, thanks so much for your advice. I really appreciate it!