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Custom character help
09-22-2017, 06:52 PM (This post was last modified: 09-22-2017 07:05 PM by samuraitrev.)
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RE: Custom character help
(09-15-2017 02:48 PM)BigDumbYak Wrote:  NOT FINAL IMAGE
Terv, got any balance reccomendations? Doesn't seem too overpowered. Probably need some re-wording and clarification on the Hero Skills.
Maybe for Ammo Belt: "Instead of searching, may take an Ammo from the discard pile." so that it matches with Sherrif Anderson's "Man of Action"


Get some props and take some photos and I'll slap up something good for the Pictures Watchmen02

If you can find a good abandoned building or an industrial setting, all the better.
if not try in front of a plain (empty wall, blue sky, something easy to crop) background. Photoshop can do the heavy lifting from there.

[Image: Hero_-_JR_Esper-_LNoE_28Small29.png]

Sorry for the late reply. I've been working like a demon.

The wording on the Shootist ability could be better as it's unclear what the +1 is for. How About:
Shootist: Add +1 to the range with any Gun Item.
or
Shootist: Add +1 To Hit with any Gun Item

(09-15-2017 09:36 PM)Otacon29 Wrote:  (Yes BDY, I agree. Changing the wording to better fit with Sheriff Anderson's ability, does make it easier to understand. Yes, you may change it.)

Alright next character in the line up.

Name:Alexander Bradish
Occupation: Ex-firefighter
Starting Location: Fire station
Male-Strange
Quote: "Let's go to the pub, have a nice cold pint, and wait for this all to blow over."
1dead, 2 wound markers
Abilities:
Reclaim: Instead of searching, may take a random card from the discard pile.
Sacrifice: During a search may sacrifice an Event card to draw another card from the Hero deck.

(One more. Also nice Job, is that the proper size and PDF format or do I need to do anything before I take it to staples?)

Name:Twiggy Bradish
Occupation: N/A
Starting Location: N/A
Male-Strange
Quote:N/A
1 dead, 2 wound markers
Abilities:
Backyard scrounger- may perform a search in any space adjacent to a building.
Fanny pack- carry 2 additional items (none can be weapons)

Alexander is well balanced. I like the character. Just capitalize things like Search, Searching, Fire Station.
Twiggy: Background Scrounger: is OP in my opinion. I like the idea but needs to be toned down. How about:
Backyard Scrounger: May Search when adjacent to any building on a roll of 5+ in the Movement phase.
Fanny Pack: This made me smile. In the UK fanny means, well, a woman's private area... Maybe change it to Backpacker or Heavy Lifter or Mule
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Custom character help - Otacon29 - 08-31-2017, 02:15 AM
RE: Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 08-31-2017, 01:45 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 08-31-2017, 08:44 PM
RE: Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 09-01-2017, 01:26 AM
RE: Custom character help - samuraitrev - 09-03-2017, 11:37 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-14-2017, 10:49 PM
RE: Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 09-15-2017, 02:48 PM
RE: Custom character help - samuraitrev - 09-22-2017 06:52 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-15-2017, 09:36 PM
RE: Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 09-16-2017, 04:59 AM
RE: Custom character help - mqstout - 09-16-2017, 05:01 AM
RE: Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 09-16-2017, 09:11 PM
RE: Custom character help - mqstout - 09-17-2017, 02:44 AM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-17-2017, 02:12 AM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-23-2017, 12:07 AM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-23-2017, 03:55 AM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-24-2017, 09:22 PM
RE: Custom character help - samuraitrev - 09-25-2017, 05:17 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-25-2017, 08:12 PM
Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 09-25-2017, 08:16 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-25-2017, 10:27 PM
Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 09-25-2017, 10:30 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 09-25-2017, 10:50 PM
RE: Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 10-09-2017, 11:38 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 10-13-2017, 11:06 PM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 12-01-2017, 11:55 PM
Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 12-02-2017, 12:17 AM
RE: Custom character help - Otacon29 - 12-02-2017, 04:31 AM
Custom character help - BigDumbYak - 12-02-2017, 06:37 AM

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