A Couple of Villains I've been working on

[themanfromsaturn]

I really like what you've done! I was taken aback (pleasantly so) by the head collector- much more ghoulish and shocking than what I'm used to for this game, and we definitely need more constructs. Nice!

The only constructive criticism I can offer is that it would be best to work with existing game components if possible- there's got to be an existing minion that would work better than the decapitators. Also, some of the rules you've come up with are a little ambiguous and seem over complicated- for instance, the advanced rules for the witch doctor- all the combat in play? That's bonkers! why not just throw in one or two walking dead minions for every hero or something?

Another thought- I'd replace the keyword 'witch doctor' with 'magick' so heroes like eliza the witch hunter and sara the bright witch can key their abilities off of him.